This portfolio is all about the writings that we have done in the first semester. After you look at my website please answer these following questions:
- What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
- What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
- Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
website: http://diormo97.wix.com/writingsstandards
1. The piece I liked the best was your Risky Business essay because not only was it written better but you learned the effects of what drugs, alcohol and household products can do to you.
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3. I think you have great ideas.
4. Your ideas are great but you should really improve on word choice and voice. You need to put your ideas in words not like how you text.