Hey Dior, okay well your graphic is okay because I understand the meaning of it with how she's confused and the question marks an what not. Also the text makes it understandable, but I feel like you didn't take that much time in doing this, you got the meaning of dori but maybe show some kind of comparison of you and dori? Well anyways your doing good soo far. Keep it up and good luck or your final! (:
Hey dior! Along with kaitlyn, I agree to what she says. Be more creative in your graphics. Maybe add some more stuff instead of just the words and question marks. Maybe even a picture of yourself. But try keep in mind your poem when your making your graphic so it relates to it better! Other then that, good job on your draft and good luck on your final!
not sure what the question marks represent so you need to make that clearer and maybe add a bit more text, but try to be more creative when doing so. AS(2)
Hey Dior, okay well your graphic is okay because I understand the meaning of it with how she's confused and the question marks an what not. Also the text makes it understandable, but I feel like you didn't take that much time in doing this, you got the meaning of dori but maybe show some kind of comparison of you and dori? Well anyways your doing good soo far. Keep it up and good luck or your final! (:
ReplyDeleteHey dior! Along with kaitlyn, I agree to what she says. Be more creative in your graphics. Maybe add some more stuff instead of just the words and question marks. Maybe even a picture of yourself. But try keep in mind your poem when your making your graphic so it relates to it better! Other then that, good job on your draft and good luck on your final!
ReplyDeletenot sure what the question marks represent so you need to make that clearer and maybe add a bit more text, but try to be more creative when doing so. AS(2)
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