Thursday, January 24, 2013

allusion poem final


Forgetting things
that’s what she’s known for.
she’s definitely not
the smartest fish in the sea.
Although she can be ditzy
she’s pretty funny too.
If you ever need a helping hand
she’s always there for you.
You’ll never meet someone
as loud and crazy as her.
Throughout the ocean blue
singing her little whale songs.
She has this little motto
to “Just keep swimming” along.

1 comment:

  1. Hey dior! Finally you post your poem up! Lol, anyways, I like your poem. Its cute and I can tell that your clearly alluding to dory from finding nemo. I think the only thing you can fix is to make it sound more like a poem or something. Try make some words rhyme if you can! Other then that, I like your poen and good job!

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